First Cut Wednesday

Today we showed the class our "First Cut" - although we had to do this by showing the 4 separate scenes as we have not been able to edit and export them all as one clip, due to technical difficulties.
We were delighted with the feedback we received.

Construction Criteria	Comment
Holding Shot Steady	Excellent
Framing of shots	Excellent
Appropriate material for task	Yes! Very clear storyline and good use of documentary conventions
Selecting mise en scene	Nice variety which suits your chosen storyline very well.
Editing for meaning	Good; but not clear what the main event is yet.
Varied shot transitions and post production effects	Great verisimilitude achieved and a sense of professionalism.
Use of sound	Quality of dialogue is excellent, music needed- but only subtle.
Use of titles	Nice titles to introduce your characters. Opening titles and end credits to come.
OVERALL COMMENT:	I predict this will be a very high level 4 when finished girls. You just need to continue to keep up the high standard of footage, and edit it together in the same minimalist and professional manner.